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Time Killer

Time Killer - Todd M Thiede Who was your favorite character? Jesse, enjoyed her outlook on life. Always cheerful.

Was the story credible? Yes, the story was credible. I can honestly see some idiot going crazy over people that might be wasting his time.

What did you dislike? Some book club members and I felt the story needed a little editing. Sometimes the author repeated things but used different wording.

Examples: "I have been following you and your family, watching you and Gwen, little Billy and Sandy in your daily lives."

Then a few sentences later: "Nonetheless, I have been watching all of you."

We understand the family was being watched. Do not understand why the author stated this two different times.

Disclosure: I received a review copy of this book from the author.